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 <h2>About</h2>
 
 <p>
-This service provides <a href="http://www.mysql.com/">MySQL</a> databases to <a href="http://ca.mit.edu/">Athena account</a> holders.
-You must choose a MySQL password (independent of your Athena account) when you <a href="signup">Signup</a> and then use this interface to create and drop databases.
-All subsequent SQL commands can be issued from any host, client, and/or script of your choosing.
+This service provides <a href="http://dev.mysql.com/doc">MySQL</a> databases to <a href="http://ca.mit.edu/">MIT certificate</a> holders.
+You must choose a MySQL password (which should be different from your Athena account password) when you <a href="do/signup">sign up</a>, and you can
+then use this interface to create and drop databases.  All subsequent SQL commands can be issued from any host, client, and/or script of your choice;
+simply connect to the MySQL server at <b>sql.mit.edu</b> using your new MySQL username and password.
+You may want to consider running scripts using the <a href="http://scripts.mit.edu/web">web script service</a> or
+<a href="http://scripts.mit.edu/shortjobs">shortjobs service</a>.
+</p>
+
+<p>
+All uses of this service must comply with the <a href="http://web.mit.edu/olh/Welcome/rules.html">MITnet rules of use</a>.
+The SIPB MySQL Service is part of the <a href="http://scripts.mit.edu/">scripts.mit.edu</a> service.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Backups</h2>
 
 <p>
-<strong>We strongly recommend you keep backups of your SQL schema and data.</strong>
+<strong>We strongly recommend you keep your own backups of your SQL schema and data. MySQL data is not stored in the AFS.</strong>
+Although we use various technical means to try to ensure the availability of your data (including hardware-level redundancy and real-time replication), we can make no guarantees about the reliability of the service and access to your data.
+<?/*
 As you work with your SQL data, it is automatically saved on an additional secondary SQL server for restoration in the event of a server failure.
-Although we continually put forth our best efforts, we can make no guarantees on the reliability of the service and access to the data.
+Although we continually put forth our best efforts, we can make no guarantees about the reliability of the service and access to the data.
+*/?>
 </p>
 
 <?/*
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 <h2>Disclaimer</h2>
 
 <p>
-We reserve the right to suspend or terminate your MySQL account at any time and for any or no reason.
-</p>
-
-<p>
+Although this service has been designed with reliability in mind, the SIPB MySQL service should not be used to host critical applications that cannot tolerate downtime.
+We may, of course, suspend or terminate your MySQL account at any time, for any or no reason.
 We perform no query logging, schema or data backups, or any other backups otherwise generally available. You are solely responsible for performing backups of your data.
-</p>
-
-<p>
 We maintain general usage statistics of this service by the MIT community at large.
 </p>